Thursday, October 29, 2015

In Transition

Day-29,OctPoWriMo-2015



muncie


The trajectory

Of human life runs 
On parallel lines
It cries
When one is born or dies.

There is symmetry

In the whole process

Give life, take life

A never ending

Wheel of existence.

As a seed grows

Into a blooming tree

And degenerate
Into withered leaves.

As the water evaporates

And then precipitates

Bringing solace

To the mankind.

Life is a motion

And we grow

In this cycle

Meeting, parting
Gathering memories,
Hopeful dreamers

Moving as pawns

On a chessboard of time.




22 comments:

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    1. Thank you very much. I too enjoyed reading your X cellent poem :)

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  2. we did have the same feeling with this prompt, didn't we?:) Your poem tugs at the heart-string. beautiful! Thank-you for your kind words at my 'porch'.

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    1. We all are fellow travellers revolving in this Cosmic energy called life , Janet :) Thank you very much for the wonderful poems which appeased the soul :)

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  3. life circle is of worthy noticing,
    love the fall leaves on top.
    :)

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    1. Thank you Cindy. My daughter sent me that pic from Indiana, where she is pursuing her masters. I felt, it fitted perfectly to showcase the life cycles :)

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  4. This is so true. Every end is a beginning.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation, Esther :) Life is a circle with a beginning and an end and vice versa :)

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    1. Glad to see your comment, Carol.Going to miss your lovely poems.

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    1. Thank you Payal, from the bottom of my heart for introducing me to this amazing forum.

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  7. a game view on ourselves is a mirror which is so clear and reflective,
    lovely imagery.

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  8. Lovely Sunita.. Circle of Life,, (Y)

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