Thursday, October 15, 2015

Wings of Fire

Day-15 OctPoWriMo-2015

First time attempted a Cinquain. I am more used to free verse. Following different styles takes courage.I admire most of the poets participating in OctPoWriMo for the inspiration .The image is taken by my daughter.




Desires
do surrender
in the flowing breeze-
depleting some  redundant thoughts
in sync.
 




10 comments:

  1. I love cinquains. You have inspired me to write one too. Enjoyed this.

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    1. I am glad you loved this one :) Thank you Cressida.

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  2. I am learning all kinds of terms for poetry this month. So much to explore. I love this one.

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    1. It indeed is an experience to learn new styles of poetry :) Thank you Jazzy.

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  3. Well done for a first cinquain. It's lovely. You should try the April Poetry Challenge NaPoWriMo where you get not just a prompt but a poetic form to do. VERY challenging but so worth it.

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    1. It was scary following the rules :D But finally I managed to give it a try. Thank you Jesi :)

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