Day 5 OctPoWriMo-2017 (Prompt-Finally I Understand )
Finally,
I understand
why it is difficult
to erase the past.
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Time,
brings forth
falling and aching,
remnants of a scarred life.
***
Between,
the spaces
of life and death,
there is the grounded hope.
***
Believing,
in timeframe
finds dreams weigh
in the fist of today.
***
Triumph,
not always
when the truth lies,
in the lines of the palms.
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Very evocative.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeletePoignant. Loved this not always
ReplyDeletewhen the truth lies,
in the lines of the palms.
Thank you Jenni..Glad to know you loved those lines :)
DeleteLove this thoughtful and thought provoking poem. This struck me:
ReplyDelete"finds dreams weigh
in the fist of today."
Thank you. xoA
Thank you for your constant encouragement,Annis :)
Deletei like the way you laid out the words. it really calls attention to every piece of the work.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Appreciated :)
DeleteThat's poignant. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you Payal :)
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